Initially our deadline was the last lesson of this week, but it got extended by another week. This gave my partner and I enough time to act on the feedback recieved from our first draft, re-film any shots that needed to be improved and finish editing our footage. The week started with our peers viewing each others work (music video, magazine advert and digipak) and giving feedback on it.
Here is some of the feedback my partner and I recieved:
In what ways does the media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products?
- Typical contentions = artists name and album
- Typical digipak = one constant image on the back cover
How effective is the combination of the main product and ancillary texts?
- Synergy = sexualisation of the artist, roses, the colour red
- Use of the rose is consistent
- Clear genre throughout (typical artist)
Strengths of the main product and ancillary texts:
- Clear font
- Layout of magazine advert
- The magazine adverts border is elegant and matches the song
- Good layout on magazine advert = good use of fonts
- Good cutting to the beat
- The rose is a good symbol of love
Suggested areas for improvement for the main product amd ancillary texts:
- Some images are blurry
- The artist should have been dressed up throughout
- The colour white should be used throughout to enhance the synergy
- Don't repeat the shot of artists eyes
- Include more grey in the magazine advert.
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